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Wednesday, September 23, 2009

Maplethorpe Ridge -- Road Map

PhotobucketIt's Writing Wednesday! And that means another new installment of Maplethorpe Ridge. Below is your map to follow along, in case you're behind.

Enjoy!

Prologue -- Aug 6, 2009
Chapter I - Welcome to Nolan (Part 1) -- Aug 10, 2009
Chapter I - Welcome to Nolan (Part 2) -- Aug 18, 2009
Chapter I - Welcome to Nolan (Part 3) -- Sept 23, 2009

Chapter I - Welcome to Nolan (Part 3)

Yes, yes. I know. It's been over a month since I last posted part of Chapter 1. I promise to be better and to keep up with my Writing Wednesdays. And now, on with the show.

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*****


The next morning, there was another article in the paper about Crystal McMannis's babies. This time it was a birth announcement. Baby-Boy and Baby-Girl McMannis has been given names -- Matthew Adam and Meghan Claire McMannis, respectively. Quinn cut this article out of the paper, just as he had the previous one, put it in an envelope, and addressed it to Alabama.

*****


Matthew and Meghan slept in their cribs in the intensive care unit while Crystal, Cody, and Tyler looked on. They were so tiny, which brought Crystal to tears. Both Tyler and Cody comforted her. Just then, Dr. Gladstone came in and told them that there was a problem. Crystal looked frightened, as did Cody, while Tyler asked what was going on. Thomas told them that Meghan's blood type did not match that of either of her parents. Cody asked him what that was, and Thomas told him that it was Type O. he also explained that since Tyler was type A and Crystal was Type AB Meghan could not be Type O. Tyler looked at Crystal with a look of concern and fear. Crystal finally buckled after several minutes and sdmitted that she slept with Cody and that Meghan must be his child. Tyler freaked out and then asked Thomas about Matthew. He said that Matthew's was also strange, but if Cody was responsible for Meghan being Type O that Matthew must have a different father than Meghan, because his blood type was B. Now, Tyler was furious. "Who is the OTHER father?" Tyler screamed. Crystal felt faint and dizzy. When her head hit the cold hospital floor, she woke up in her bed, covered with sweat...a bad dream.

*****


Jen woke up on the couch of her apartment with a pounding headache. She staggered to the bathroom and grabbed a bottle of aspirin, took four of them, and went to the kitchen to make breakfast. On her way to the kitchen, she discovered the note from Blake on the floor. She read it, got a puzzled look on her face, and made breakfast. After she ate, she called the hospital and told them that she wouldn't be coming in because she was ill. Once she felt better, she picked up the phone and called Blake's parents in San Diego. Blake was not the type of girl to just pick up and leave town, even if it was for an emergency such as the note had said. Plus, Jen also remembered Blake telling her that her grandmother had died when she was in elementary school. Blake's mom, Evelyn, told Jen that she had remembered correctly; her mother had died fiften years earlier and that she hadn't heard from Blake in several days. Jen hung up the phone and crawled into the shower. her hangover would have to wait; the search for Blake Montgomery had begun.

*****


Tyler and Cody arrived at the hospital after Crystal had calmed herself down enough to fall back asleep. They watched her sleep for a while, then decided to go look in on the twins. They cooed at the glass of the ICU windows and smiled as Matthew and Meghan slept. Tyler went to hunt down Dr. Gladstone to get some more details on Crystal's homecoming tomorrow. After Tyler left, Nick came and looked at the twins. He then got into a heavy discussion with Cody.

"So, do you think that they could be your children?" He asked sarcastically.

"They can't be." Cody tried to be positive, but it wasn't really working. "Tyler and Crystal are very much in love. If even one of them is mine, it would destroy both of them."

"But you can't deny that the possibility is there. Can you?"

"Nick, what would Linda say if she knew that the possibility is there that they could be your children?" Cody retorted.

"Ah, one time, when compared to many, many encounters at the Nolan Inn, greatly reduces the chances that either one off them is my child." Nic paused to gauge Cody's reaction. After a moment, he continued. "how healthy was Tyler and Crystal's sex life? I mean, obviously it wasn't earth-shattering if she slept with you even once. But they did make love, didn't they?"

"From what I understood, Tyler enjoyed his wife, when he could."

"'When he could,' what kind of crap is that?"

"He is always busy with some case or another." Cody explained. "But this past yar, Tyler has had some more personal problems. That is why she came to me in the first place."

Nick raised an eyebrow, knowing that Cody was lying to him. "Let's hope that Chance is in our favor." Nick added; he was almost friendly.

"Amen to that."

Nick took off after grilling Cody. he did not need to get into another fight with Cody at the hospital. About ten minutes later, Cody received a light tap on his shoulder and was greeted by the smell of Chanel No5. He turned around. "Grandma!" Cody shouted. Rose Weber was volunteering at the hospital that morning and was very surprised to see her grandson there. Cody explained the situation about Tyler and Crystal. Rose offered to say a prayer for them and went off on her merry way but not before she had invited Cody, Tyler, Crystal, and Cody's choice of a date over for dinner. Cody accepted for all of them and kissed his grandma good-bye.

After she left, Cody resumed his gazing at the babies. He felt really bad about everything that had happened. He told them that they would never know about him and their mother. He kissed the glass and left. After Cody was clear out of sight, Quinn popped his head out from behind a potted plant, turned off the video camera, and left.

*****


Jen rushed to the door hoping that it was Blake and that she was knocking because she forgot her key. But it wasn't. It was Blake's parents, Evelyn and Robyn. The instant that Jen opened the door, Mrs. Montgomery started screaming about her "poor baby" and babbling about how she was never going to see her again. Every time that Mr. Montgomery tried to get a word in edgewise, Evelyn cut him off; each time she did that, Robyn seemed to grow shorter. Jen brushed it off as her over-active imagination. She showed them the note that was obviously in Blake's own handwriting. Evelyn began to cry, but when Robyn tried to comfort her, she shoved him away. She would only let Jen hold her. Jen offered to put the Montgomery's up for the night, but Evelyn said that she already made Robyn get them a room at the Nolan Inn. Jen told them that she had to work at six in the morning the next day, but she would be done by noon and they could go and get Tyler McMannis to do something to find Blake.

Just when she had shushed the Montgomery's and shooed them out the door, the phone rang. It was Cody; he invited her to have dinner with him grandparents and Tyler and Crystal (who had been released from the hospital). Jen accepted and said nothing about her disappearing roommate. She needed to have a good time. Cody arrived at eight-thirty and they drove off to the Weber's historic estate on the hill, just outside of Nolan.

Linda showed up at Maplethorpe ad Jen and Cody were leaving for the Weber's. She looked rather annoyed, so neither Jen nor Cody started a conversation with her. Jen and Cody pulled out, and Linda stormed inside. She knocked on the door labeled "Manager". A shirtless Lucas Montgomery answered the door with a cigarette in his mouth and a beer in his hand. He let Linda inside and offered her a smoke, which she accepted. They carried on about fifteen minutes of small talk before Linda got down to why she was actually there.

"Do you have any vacat apartments that are available for rent?"

"I may." Lucas replied. "If I remember correctly, someone on the second floor may be moving out."

"When will you know for sure?" Linda asked.

Lucas took a step closer to Linda and blew out a large plume of smoke from his nostrils. "When you give me what I want...what I need."

"And what is that exactly?" Linda asked coyly, knowing what was about to happen, yet pretending not to know in a flirty way that she was very good at conveying.

"Your security deposit."

And as he said this last line, which he has used many times before, Lucas kissed Linda's neck. Linda submitted, and eventually, the two of them became a tangle of sweaty flesh on the floor of Lucas's apartment.

*****


Quinn took the videotape out of the camera, put in the VCR, watched, and heard Cody and Nick's conversation outside the nursery. He saw Rose come and tap Cody's shoulder and saw Cody talking to the twins and kissing the window. After he watched it, he rewound the tape, took it out of the VCR, and put it in an envelope. Quinn addressed it to Alabama and went to bed, with a smile on his face.

*****


Cody and Jen pulled into the drive at the Weber Mansion. The butler, Sven, let them in and led them to the parlor where the other guests were waiting for them. Sven opened the door and there was Rose, Tyler and Crystal, sitting having drinks and trying to keep up polite conversation. Jen and Cody joined them and introductions were passed around. After about fifteen more minutes of drinks and small talk, Rose suggested that they adjourn to the dining room for dinner. Cody asked where Marc was and Rose told him that he was preparing a surprise and would meet them in the dining room.

Rose opened the French doors to the dining room and let out the most shrill, most blood-curdling scream a 76-year-old woman has ever screamed. Cody rushed to her, and then they all saw him. Marc Weber was slumped over at the table. There was a knife protruding from his back, and his shirt was stained red with his blood.

Tyler turned to Jennifer and said, "Welcome to Nolan, Jen."

Wednesday, September 2, 2009

Blog Sorting

Since I have decided that I am going to be posting my personal journal stuff here instead of over at the LJ. I thought it would be nice to add a couple of links over on the side bar.

Look over at the right...

If you only want to read Maplethorpe Ridge or if you just want the personal posts, simply click the appropriate link on the right. No need to sort through miscellaneous crap, when you can have the interwebs do it for you.

Anyway, enjoy. I am still working on Chapter 1, but it will get posted up soon. Sorry for the delays there.

Wednesday, August 19, 2009

Maplethorpe Ridge -- Road Map

PhotobucketIt's Writing Wednesday! And that means another new installment of Maplethorpe Ridge. Below is your map to follow along, in case you're behind.

Enjoy!

Prologue -- Aug 6, 2009
Chapter I - Welcome to Nolan (Part 1) -- Aug 10, 2009
Chapter I - Welcome to Nolan (Part 2) -- Aug 18, 2009

Chapter I - Welcome to Nolan (Part 2)

Blake knocked on the door to the apartment directly under hers. A dark haired man answered the door. "Hi. My name is Blake Montgomery," she stuttered out, obviously overpowered by his good looks.

"Hello, Blake Montgomery; my name is Adrian Connor. What can I do for you?" She mumbled about she and Jen living upstairs and that his music was a tad too loud. Adrian said that he did not think that anyone lived in the apartment above him. Then, he asked her in for a drink.

Yes, you heard right -- Adrian Connor. Adrian is the middle child of Linda and Nicolas Connor. Totally hot by any woman's standard, yet totally unavailable; although, Blake had no way of knowing that when her new neighbor made her heart skip a beat and butterflies tickle her inside. Adrian was trying to make a go of it on his own without his family's money. He loved his mother very much, but being the black sheep of his family, his father was always disapproving of anything he did. Adrian had his work cut out for him, but for now, he was content to share some wine with Blake and get to know his new neighbor.

*****


Both Tyler and Cody donated blood at the hospital for Crystal, and both of them were incompatible with Crystal's blood. All they could do was sit with her and hold her hands, while she lay unconscious in her hospital bed. Within mere moments, the somber mood in the room was broken with the entrance of a nurse bearing news. Someone had come to the hospital and donated enough blood to help Crystal, and the blood was a match. The two men watched as Dr. Gladstone and the nurse attached the clear vinyl pouches of life to Crystal's IV. Almost immediately, they could see a difference in Crystal's condition.

Tyler and Cody wanted to meet and thank the mysterious donor, but he had already left the hospital by the time the nurse came with the blood. They asked for his name and telephone number, but the nurse said that the donor wished to remain anonymous. This was a strange, but not uncommon, hospital occurrence.

Once the transfusion was complete, Crystal opened her eyes, looked at her husband, and smiled.

*****


Linda Connor arrived at Crystal's hospital room in time to watch Crystal and her husband kiss after the transfusion. Cody greeter her in the hall and filled her in on the news, the irony of which was not lost on Cody. This thought made him giggle as he held the door open for Linda. She brought a large flower arrangement and sat in on the nightstand by the bed. She put her hands on Tyler's shoulders and told him that she was glad that all went well. They discussed the mysterious donor, and Tyler asked her how she knew that Crystal was in the hospital. Linda showed him the newspaper with Crystal's picture on the front page. Cody added that it was a good thing there was an article in teh paper, because that was probably how the mysterious donor found out about Crystal.

Linda wished them all well and left for work. As she rounded the corner and slipped out of sight, Nick peered out from the storage closet and walked to Crystal's room. He did not open the door. Instead, he looked in the window. Crystal saw him, and they exchanged heated glances.

*****


Blake stepped inside Adrian's apartment. It was an exact copy of her and Jen's apartment upstairs, and it was decorated quite spartanly. A single painting hung in the living room. There was minimal furniture, but there was still enough floor Blake to be comfortable. Adrian poured two glasses of wine and they sat on the sofa, talked, and played some music.

There was a knock on the door. Adrian answered, still holding his glass of wine. A beautiful blonde in her early 20s stood there looking very angry and tapping her foot.

"Excuse me, but your music is too loud. I live upstairs, and it's rattling the entire floor. Could you please turn it down?"

"Jen? Jen, is that you?" Blake asked from inside the apartment. Blake appeared standing behind the young man in the doorway. Blake introduced Adrian to Jen, and Adrian asked her in to join them. Jen explained that both she and Blake had lots of unpacking to do, but the offer was nice. "We'll have to make it some other night," Jen uttered politely, yet firmly. Adrian closed the door, and Blake could not take her eyes off of it.

"So, you meant to tell me that while I was up there -- cleaning and unpacking -- you were downstairs drinking wine with the cute neighbor?"

"Exactly!" Blake retorted.

"Way to go girl!" Jen shouted and high-fived her roommate. Tehy made dinner and watched a movie. Later that night, Blake fell asleep with visions of Adrian runner through her head. Needless to say, she slept well.

*****


Nick broke the stare with Crystal, turned to leave, and smacked right into a nurse carrying a tray of food bound for Crystal's room. The nurse dropped the tray with a loud bang. A curious Cody came into the corridor and saw Nick standing there with his shirt covered in lime-flavored gelatin. "What are you doing here?" He asked, laughing.

"I read about Mrs. McMannis in the paper, and I wanted to come by and see how my wife's friend was doing. I have a right to be concerned," Nick replied with what he thought was an appropriate level of detached concern.

"There's no room here for YOUR type of concern!" Cody bellowed.

Tyler appeared in the doorway and asked the two of them to keep it down. "She's in a very delicate state now. I think you should leave." Tyler sounded both exhausted and annoyed. Nick conceded and left, and Cody joined Tyler back in Crystal's room. She had fallen asleep. Dr. Gladstone checked on Crystal, and told Tyler and Cody to go home and get some rest.

*****


Nick stood outside his front door for a good two minutes dreading teh inevitable conversation with his wife. The solid white painted, scalloped steel door stared back at him with its chrome peephole, daring him to enter. When his resolve had been set, he showed teh door who was boss and flicked the lever that opened the latch on the handle. The door fell open on the hinges, and Linda was standing there with a disgusted look on her face. "What the hell, woman!" She managed the upper hand of surprise against her husband. "Where you just camped out by the door waiting for me to get home?"

"Shut up." Linda spoke calmly, despite her boiling anger beneath the surface. "Why didn't you just tell me? Christ, she's my friend! Why do you even care about her? Couldn't you have told me without making me read it in the fucking paper!" She punctuated her last sentence by hitter her husband with the exact "fucking paper" to which she was referring.

*****


Quinn sat down in his standard hotel room that smelled of both bleach and cigarette smoke and flipped through the paper. He grabbed the scissors and cut out the article about Crystal, put it in an envelope, and addressed it to Alabama.

*****


Throughout the night, Dr. Gladstone looked in on Crystal. He kept tabs on her, and he even began to wonder why Nick Connor had been there earlier that afternoon. Thomas Gladstone moved to Nolan only the year before. He knew that Nick was a lawyer who was often called away on business to San Diego -- which meant that he must be a fairly good lawyer. He also knew that his wife, Linda, was the anchorwoman for the evening news at Channel 4. But he could not figure out how they knew Crystal. He speculated that they must be neighbors or something, and went about his rounds.

*****


Blake woke up at quarter to eight and went for her daily three-mile run. On the way out the door, she bumped into Adrian (literally), and the two of them decided to run together. They stopped at the convenience store that marked the mile-and-a-half point where they would turn around and run back to the apartment. Adrian decided that he needed to use the restroom, so Blake bought a blue-raspberry squishy, and waited on the bench outside.

*****


Jennifer woke up from a very, very nice dream at around eight-fifteen. She made some breakfast, which consisted of toast, eggs, cereal, and juice, and took a shower. She got dressed and headed for the hospital. While she was driving, she passed the convenience store and saw Adrian sitting on the bench outside and waved at him. He just gave her a concerned look and raised his hand. If Jen hadn't already been late for work, she would have stopped to talk to him.

When she arrived at the hospital, Jen checked in with Dr. Gladstone, whom she met during her first week of work. Thomas told her about Crystal, and explained that she was the most exciting thing to happen at University Hospital for quite some time, especially when nick showed up and argued with Cody. Jen checked in with her head nurse, then sat down and played checkers with Irene, who insisted on yelling at Jen to "Hurry up!"

Linda stopped by the hospital long before Cody and Tyler ever showed up that morning. Crystal was asleep, but Linda stayed and talked with her anyway, all the while stroking her hair. There was a kind of dialogue between the two that no one could decipher by just being in the room. Linda talked to Crystal, and Crystal answered, unfortunately, Linda could not hear her.

"I don't know how to do about Nick, Crys. He doesn't seem to care any more. He goes to work and defends people he's never met before, but he doesn't even have tim to have a conversation with me," Linda explained.

I understand why, Crystal answered in her dream mind. I know Nick. He's not the type to share what's bothering him. You should let him be.

"I can feel him slipping away," Linda continued. "Last week, I told him that I was seeing another man, and he said 'That's nice, dear' and kissed me on the forehead. ON THE FOREHEAD, that's like a punch in the gut."

If I knew what Nick had done, I would punch him in the gut. You should just give up on him, Linda. You can do better. I think that Dr. Gladstone is available; why don't you ask him out?

"I realize that he's had a tough case he's been working on in San Diego these past months," Linda went on, oblivious to Crystal's half of the conversation. "But that's not an excuse for him to treat me like shit. I think that if I can just hang in there, things will get better soon."

Don't count on it honey, Crystal warned.

"Just like I know that things will get better for you soon, too." With that, Linda kissed her friend and left.

*****


Adrian went back into the convenience store and asked the clerk if she had seen Blake. She said that Blake had been sitting on the bench while he was in the restroom. Then, she looked out again and she was gone.

"Maybe she got paged and had to leave. Or, maybe she thought that I left ahead of her so that I would beat her back home," he told himself as he started running back. "I bet when I get back to Maplethorpe, Blake will be sitting on the porch waiting for me with a big glass of lemonade." As he ran, he kept trying to convince himself that Blake would be there, but when he got there, she wasn't. He went inside and knocked on her door, where he found a note...

Jen--

I've gone to visit my parents in San Diego. My grandmother is very ill and Mother fears that she may not have much time left. Don't expect me to call, but keep us in your thoughts.
Always,
Blake


Adrian considered this a rather odd place for a very personal note, so he slipped it under the door.

*****


At the hospital, Jen ran into Tyler and Cody. When Tyler went in to see his wive, Cody asked Jen out for drinks when she got off from work. Jena accepted and told him to come back to the hospital and pick her up at 7pm. when Jen rounded the corner, to continue on her rounds, Nick propped his head out of the closet. He saw Cody, walked up behind him, and tapped him on his shoulder. When Cody turned around, Nick clocked him: punched him square in the left eye. Cody buckled but not before he punched Nick right in the gut. The pair of punches erupted into a brawl between the two men. Luckily, Jen was still nearby and ran back to stop it. She asked Nick to leave, and he did, but not before he gave his parting remarks, like a haunting Gypsy curse, he yelled, "You shouldn't even be allowed near her, Weber! You will pay for what you've done!"

Cody tried to utter a clever rebuttal, but his face hurt too much. All he could produce was a meek grunt of disgust. Luckily for him, he was injured in the hospital. Jen got a nurse to check him out, and she asked him if they were still on for drinks that night. Cody nodded a tired yes.

*****


Cody was standing at the main door to the hospital when Jen staggered out at quarter past seven. She apologized, and then Cody drove her Scully's for a drink. Over drinks, Jen asked Cody about the incident between him and Mr. Connor. Cody said that he had done some things in his past of which he was no very proud, but that Nick Connor was a hundred times worse. Cody expressed his sympathy for Linda and said that someone should buy her a clue. Jen asked if his past involved Crystal McMannis. Because of the amount of bourbon that was poured into Cody's system, he admitted that he and Nick were fighting about Crystal. "ever since last summer we fight over Crystal. Tyler doesn't have a clue. And I pray to God that he never gets one."

Jen made it home all right; although, she was feeling her drinks quite happily. She opened the door marked "4G" with her key and stepped inside. On the floor she found a note. She read it, put it back on the floor, and sat on the couch. Sometime during the next twenty minutes, she fell over and asleep.

Monday, August 10, 2009

Maplethorpe Ridge -- Road Map

PhotobucketSo, thinking about how this blog is going to roll out, I decided that we really need a road map to keep people reading the story chronologically and to try to avoid accidentally reading ahead. After I post a new bit of the story, I'll post the Road Map with links to and dates for all the posted parts of the story. Hopefully, this will work and not be too confusing.

Prologue -- Aug 6, 2009
Chapter I - Welcome to Nolan (Part 1) -- Aug 10, 2009

Thursday, August 6, 2009

Prologue

PhotobucketOnce upon a time... No, that's not quite right. The phrase, "once upon a time", typically denoted the beginning of a story. Once upon a time, a boy and a girl were lost in the woods, and they came upon a house made of candy. Once upon a time, a girl went walking carrying a basket of goodies to Grandma's house. This is more of what one would call an epic saga: a story that transcends "once upon a time", and becomes a lifetime of romance and adventure. A story of how a young, troubled girl stumbled into something she could nave never imagined. A story of how a young woman struggled to right the wrongs of her past and discovered something greater than herself and of how the lives of strangers in suburbia can become secretly intertwined. This is my story.

I was born in Kentucky in the late 1970s. My parents were both professors in the history department at the nearby university, and for all I knew, they loved each other very much. I had many friends, when I was a child, but none of my friendships stood the test of time. I struggled through high school, and with the prodding help of both my parents, I was able to graduate on time with less-than-stellar grades that were good enough to get me into college out of state and away from my parents.

College was my time. My time to start life over out the shadow of my very loving, yet very overbearing parents. But as interesting as my time at the university was, my story doesn't start there. The good part starts a few years later when -- for reasons that I'm sure will become clear when I get to that part of the story -- I found myself in suburban Las Vegas.

Actually, as I look back on it now -- many, many years removed from the situation -- a crucial event took place in my live at the tender age of sixteen. This would be during that trying time of my life when my parents were pushing me hard to survive high school, when I was trying not to stand out in school, and when my live was the same as any any normal sixteen year old girl living in the early 1990s. One day after school, I was snooping around my father's study. This was the one day that I knew he would be at the university late, because he taught his class on the Roman Empire in the evening. Many weeks leading up to that day, I had fantasized about what was behind that old, oak door. The shiny brass knob and the warnings from my father to stay out of his study tantalized me. That day, I decided to risk it and open the door.

Inside was pretty much what I expected to see, but not what I had hoped. What I had hoped to see upon opening the door was something interesting: a treasure map to the Pharaoh's lost fortune, a diamond found while looting the pirate's booty in Bermuda, or even just a stack of dirty men's magazines that my father didn't want me to know about. What I saw was none of those thigns, merely an apparently normal office-style room. One entire wall was bookshelves filled with row upon row of historical texts, some about Ancient Rome, other about Nazi Germany, and a whole shelf-full devoted to the American Civil War.

I had decided to leave and has actually turned toward the door when something peculiar caught my eye. A very large, very old book laid open on the side table next to one of my father's sitting chairs. This seemed odd to me, considering the respect for books that he had ingrained in me for as long as I could remember. I looked at the book, and I discovered what had entranced my father so much. The book was a hefty, leather bound tome that had to be well over a hundred years old, perhaps even two or three hundred. The pages were thick and their edges were rough from over use. Carefully, I closed the book enough to glimpse the title: Mystical Objects of the Ancient World. I flipped through the pages and nothing seemed to jump out at me. Just another one of his history books, I thought. I returned the book to the page my father had left open and turned to leave. That's when it happened. A cold, no make that frigid (it was much colder than simply cold), a frigid breeze ripped through my father's study, and I heard my name whispered on it. It lasted only a second, but it was powerful enough to stay in my memory all these years.

i didn't know it then, but that moment was one of what they call "defining moments" in a person's life. For a few nights after that incident, I had nightmares. Cold hands caressing me in my sleep, creepy old men whispering my name on their deathbeds, you know, standard nightmare fare. And being the sixteen-year-old that I was, within a week the whole thing -- the book, the frigid breeze, the voice, my father's study, everything -- had slipped my mind, and I was back to wondering (more worrying really) if some boy was going to ask me to the homecoming dance.

That was until the day, many years later, that I made a phone call. My story doesn't start there either. But don't worry. You'll hear the whole thing in due time. Just remember like in every good story, this story has lots of characters. Some come and go just as quickly as a frigid breeze. Some linger in your life like a scab on your shin that you keep knocking off every time you walk past the coffee table. And some you wish would never leave. My story is full of such people, and you'll get to know all of them at least as well as I did. So, have patience my friend, and settle in, because as I have learned, my live was quite the adventure.

Wednesday, August 5, 2009

Maplethorpe Ridge -- Intro

Okay, so I think first off is my MAJOR project. It started out on a whim years ago. I picked up some paper and a pen and said to myself, "Today, Ephram, you're going to start writing a novel." Knowing how I get and how bad my ADD gets, I didn't expect a novel to actually come from any of this "spare time writing." What happened was amazing. I became drawn into this world that I had created and obsessed with the people that lived there. This was my creation, and I loved it. So, instead of it falling by the wayside after a few attempts at writing something, I actually had a living, breathing universe. There were characters that enchanted me and stories that I wanted to tell. And over the course of the next few years, a novel emerged -- Maplethorpe Ridge.

Beyond that, MR became more than a novel to me. The story didn't end at the end. I saw the end as a new beginning, and my "on a whim" idea blossomed into what I envisioned as a series of novels.

This is by far the meatiest thing that I have ever written. Somewhere in my stacks of backup CDs from old computers is a MS Word file of over 600 pages. That is the first book of MR. MR took me probably five years to write start to finish at a "when I got inspired" pace. And what one can imagine about a work of fiction that grew and evolved over the course of years is that it got to be jumpy and fractured, and I know that there are continuity issues in it. My major goal of my twin-inspired blog is to edit, polish, and share the beauty that is Maplethorpe Ridge.

About a year or so ago (probably close to two now), I got the itch to work on it again. I had started writing book two in the series, and it severely irritated me not having book one in what I would consider a "finished" format. So, I printed out the entire latest version on paper and put it in a 3-ring binder. My goal here was to hand edit and reread the whole thing cover-to-cover (a feat that I have sadly still not done). Unfortunately, editing it was not nearly as exciting as writing it, and after a few days, the binder was shelved and now taunts me from the bookshelf in the bedroom.

This blog is going to be me doing my by hand "final" edits on MR, and in the process, sharing it with the world (or anyone who stumbles upon it). I'm going to embark on the arduous task of retyping the whole thing -- cover to cover. This, my friends, will be far easier for me than simply editing it on paper. And, it will give me the added thrust to work on it knowing that other people are out there reading it and (dear lord, hopefully) anxiously awaiting the next segment.

I know. These sound like such lofty goals indeed. But the past few days of setting up this blog have reenergized me in a way that I've not seen since I first wrote the last chapter.

What I'd like to do for you now is whet your whistle for what's to come over the coming months. To do this, I'll try my best to describe what this world is all about without giving too much away in terms of actual story. I had toyed with the idea of actually getting this guy published in a physical way several times, and I even went so far as to submit sample chapters to a publisher. This publisher requested a one-page summary/description to accompany the sample chapters. Whenever I think about this book, I think of that summary that I wrote. I'm going to do my best to recreate that now. I apologize at the start if it sounds generic, but I don't want to spoil anything in the story.

Maplethorpe Ridge is a sci-fi, romance novel. I wrote what I like, so it's part soap opera, part mystery, part sci-fi, and (I hope) incredibly addictive. Maplethorpe Ridge is the story of several women and how they deal with their lives under various trying circumstances. It's a growing and learning experience -- finding love, losing love, learning things about themselves and the world, and having grand adventures. Crystal is pregnant and harboring a dark secret from her husband. Linda is trapped in a loveless marriage, yearning to give her lonely life meaning. Evelyn craves power and control and seeks it out at the expense of her family. And Kelly is hell bent on getting revenge on those who have wronged her in the past. But no one in this suburb on the hills and cliffs overlooking Las Vegas has any idea what's really in store for them when mysterious, ancient relics begin to surface in their lives.

Reading that doesn't really do anything any real justice. But it makes sense to me, knowing the whole story. And, of course, Crystal, Evelyn, Linda, and Kelly aren't the only women of focus in MR, but they're there right from the beginning.

My plan (who knows if I'm going to be able to stick with it **fingers crossed**) is to work on one chapter each week and post what I hope is a final version of each one as I go. If I remember correctly, there are twenty-two chapters. So, hopefully, you're up for some romantic, soapy, sci-fi, adventure over the next few months. I know I am!